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A heartfelt poem by a daughter

June 3, 2017
poem from a daughter to a father

This is a short heartfelt poem from a daughter to a father, who has tasted the consequences of silence in their relationship.

Suna hai maine
Betiyan Papa ki dulari hoti hain
Par mehsoos nahi kiya kabhi maine

Suna hai maine
Betiyon se na naraz hote hain Papa
Par khamoshi ko saha hai maine

Suna hai maine
Door jane ke bad aur pyari lagti hain betiyan
Par paraya karte dekha hai maine


सुना है

बेटियाँ पापा की दुलारी होती हैं

पर महसूस नहीं किया कभी मैनें

सुना है

बेटियों से न नाराज़ होते हैं पापा

पर ख़ामोशी को सहा है मैनें

सुना है

दूर जाने के बाद और प्यारी लगती हैंबेटियां

पर पराया करते देखा है मैनें


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19 Comments

  • Reply Suresh Kalra June 19, 2017 at 8:56 pm

    same sad feeling but I said in my poetry few years before for bro sis relations as below

    “Kal tak jo thhey khoon ke rishton mein
    Aaj unka milna bhi hota hai kishton mein. …

    Although nice words my sis

    Keep going on . .. ….

  • Reply Ayesha June 9, 2017 at 8:21 pm

    At least you could express unlike me.

    • Reply Upasna June 10, 2017 at 8:24 am

      Di…Sending hugs.

  • Reply Vishal Bheeroo June 8, 2017 at 11:36 pm

    It’s cute, power and deep with a voice that thunders above prejudices and judgment but soothes like a lullaby.
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    • Reply Upasna June 13, 2017 at 7:37 am

      Thanks for such a thoughtful comment Vishal.

  • Reply Shantala June 7, 2017 at 5:42 am

    It’s sad that she did not get to experience her father’s love. No child should ever be deprived of the unconditional love parents have for their kids.
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    • Reply Upasna June 13, 2017 at 7:33 am

      Thanks for your comment Shantala.

  • Reply Manisha Garg June 6, 2017 at 12:40 pm

    Its touching and feel the silence

    • Reply Upasna June 7, 2017 at 12:15 am

      Thanks Manisha

  • Reply Saumy June 6, 2017 at 12:26 pm

    Woah! That’s a pretty powerful poem. Heartfelt emotions and meaningful composition. 👌
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    • Reply Upasna June 7, 2017 at 12:01 am

      Hey Thanks Saumy..It would be great if you can join Quoted Stories with one of your great clicks.

  • Reply Amit Prakash June 5, 2017 at 9:12 pm

    Beautiful emotions…very nicely written:-)

  • Reply Akshata June 5, 2017 at 2:30 pm

    It beautifully depicts the unspoken love, emotions withheld and pain. A wake up call to dads

    • Reply Upasna June 7, 2017 at 12:12 am

      Thanks Akshata..Each word is felt and written straight from the heart.

  • Reply Harsh yadav June 3, 2017 at 3:30 pm

    Very nice, Short n Sweet 🙂

    • Reply Upasna June 7, 2017 at 12:13 am

      Thanks a lot Harsh.

  • Reply dipika singh June 3, 2017 at 3:06 pm

    Loved it very touchy..

    • Reply Upasna June 7, 2017 at 12:15 am

      Thanks Dipika. Its strange na ..some emotions can best expressed only in Mother tongue.

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